This book has a lot of pros but the cons have started to outweigh then IMO.I have read until chapter 250 so I can say objectively that the story has a lot going for it story wise but when you pad your word count on literally every single chapter with a notice not to pirate, which will happen regardless, then I lose trust in your integrity as an author. (I understand not wanting your hard work to be given away for free but I shouldn't have to pay for your insecurity.)Second, filler chapters and filler content to pad the word count... With the amount of information that is nonrepetative in the 250 chapters I read you could have gotten the message across in half that number.That said, I do enjoy the concept and ideas you have but they need to be executed more efficiently.(Yes I understand that most webnovels are padded with repetition and filler but that doesn't make it right, does it?)With some slight tweaking and focusing more on story development rather than useless banter between characters then this story could be great.
I love it. The characters. The plot. Oh my. Oh my. The female lead could change the whole kingdom. I would really want to see the female lead to take the kingdom and ensure her son's survival. Love it. Please update soon.
Can’t stand the childish Mc who wastes the system that they get. He acts like he’s 10 five or take a year. The rambling on without controlling what he says combined with the childish antics is too much and I didn’t even finish the first arc…
Hello Author here!First, I would like to say that I don't have much vocabulary. I'm still an ******* and my grades in English subj were lower than you could have imagined. So some words kept repeating but I guarantee you that I've already planned this whole story. I've already had all that Arcs and the Ending in my notebook(I've wrote it there at the back of my math notebook). I think for for those people who like reading adventures and action will like my novel. This will be a full action story... Probably...Hais... I don't know what I was saying anymore. Well, thanks for reading and I will accept all the criticism with open arms. Good luck! I hope you enjoy it! I truly truly hope that you enjoy it, no, I wish that you enjoy it.
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