Top Quality work , I like how the author lets the Mc do what he wants and letting him go of his regrets by giving him the power to change it by himself .
Cliché story with cliché characters, nothing more nothing less.
Girls and women alike falling in love with the mc easily thanks to his system. Every girl is a 'jade' beauty be it mature or young. The visual sense of their looks doesn't bring any realistic sense to readers because every one of them is a 'jade' beauty.
Story development isn't exciting for any reason, just some girls got hooked up by mc due to poor circumstances, bad husbands, need of money etc.
This is so disgustingly trash full of drama reverse ra- pe and ra pe victim being lover you know where this is going the drama part the mc keeps on leaving women he slept with in dangerous situation mostly the married women and their daughter with trash or abusive husband (mom-daughter) they are so dumb more like retard just like the author. The authors keeps doing trash sh !Ts just for disgusting drama when mc can just end it with him bringing them to his home to those with whom he has slept with but nah he leaves the lanlord with the husband who will sell his own wife just for some penny (Mc knows her husband sold her to someone when he lost a beta to someone ) yet knowing that insteat of taking her with him he just gives her his number and leaves bro says he hates cliches yet is the one who is doing that just to create drama
The word Cliché is an understatement for this fast as* plot, come on, put some depth into your novel, the only thing that's keeping your novel from being the same as MTL is the decent English, you could have put some time to add depth into your novel, your novels feels like a copy and paste of typical URBAN Chinese novel with the author having patience of a 5 year old, and imagination of a person under a rock, just by having 1 love interest you separate from the other urban novels, by having patience and making it so that he spends his money in a smart way would make your better than others, and by making his system point is converted by spending money with a ratio of 1:10000 and by having plans & goals you will have something to look forward to.
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Girls and women alike falling in love with the mc easily thanks to his system. Every girl is a 'jade' beauty be it mature or young. The visual sense of their looks doesn't bring any realistic sense to readers because every one of them is a 'jade' beauty.
Story development isn't exciting for any reason, just some girls got hooked up by mc due to poor circumstances, bad husbands, need of money etc.
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