Too many contradictions. First shes weak, then suddenly she regains her former strength, then shes weak again. The opening scene was good, but afterwards the plotline went down hill. it's just too stupid, no common sense at all. How is he standing after a knife wound but she faints after being shot, and it's still bleeding. The bullet would have cauterized the wound and stopped the bleeding. On the other hand, a knife wound to the stomach would have bled out a lot, unless he left the knife in (which did not happen.) Honestly. There is no common sense, with fight scenes, characters brains, anything. There are so many inconsistencies, and common sense errors, that it's too much to write down.It's okay if you dont wanna think, but the romance does not make up for the crappy plot.
The first arc was what I wanted in a novel. Using medical knowledge to make REAL medicines in an ancient world. I had hope for this novel, what was he going to do after being ran out because of penicillin? Was he going to run to another kingdom, form a medical guild or even his own town? Nope, the novel goes full wuxia with the same plot over and over and over again. Goes to new place, chick helps him out, he gets stronger, moves to new place. Oh, look another new chick. . . . .
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