The uninvited guest

    Author: Beneth_Peace
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. nocheats
    nocheats rated it
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    Not sure if people are able to see my author's notes or reading them so I am putting this here for all to hopefully see. Please rate/review if you are enjoying the story I would greatly appreciate it. Any votes with power stones are absolutely welcome as well! Feel free to give me constructive feedback or just have a ****** discussion about the story. I love interacting with my readers. Thanks for reading!
  1. AstroXVXV
    AstroXVXV rated it
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    I see potential here………………………………………………. I will keep reading so write more 😀 Please
  1. RavenDiamond
    RavenDiamond rated it
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    It's good just needs a little character development
  1. Anajiya
    Anajiya rated it
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    Read up to chapter 211, why, cause I was bored. Anyways synopses is, lot's of all of other country's people die in dungeons (100%, you know nationalistic stuff, Only my Dragon Country deserves to live!), capitalist's are the true evil (though there is not one mentioned group/society that is not for profit), hypocrisy is a must (how dare they do X, When we do X it makes complete sense), and rape/raped to death is very very popular theme. Very surprised that last one did not make the comments. So much rape/rape to death. But I like the female MC with her invincible bubble of innocents and plot armor. She just does what she wants and doesn't really get manipulated.
  1. Gabriel_Silva_8900
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    Author randomly gave out a spoiler about the novel's conclusion. Appears to be a novel about politics in the middle ages. Dunno whether or not there are any fantasy elements.  It's probably good?  But if you're gonna read a novel full of political schemes and criminal masterminds why read this? That's all I'm saying.
  1. Azathoth2
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    "You have done something very grave Jem when one forcefully stops their ascent to rank three..." He shakes his head with a grave look on his face. "The trial becomes harder and harder to complete the further you hold it back. Although there have been records of people holding their's back for a month..." Again he looked as if seeing a dead man. "They have all died Jem, and since we have no records of a person with the chains holding back their ascent, we expect your trail to be the hardest and most destructive in recorded history."
  1. CoughBlood
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    " I messed you naruchan" Imuttered before I  fell asleep with my arms around her chest as she uncounciously snuggled into me
  1. EmmanuelMountain
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  1. Prometheusgod
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    He was dumbfounded when he saw her face, when he saw her tears. When he saw her Scarlet Hair.........It was the first time since the day he became an orphan that he cried.
  1. OtuHarriet46782Rm
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    "This was a first for me in my year's medicine. This situation shouldn't have been this positive if it was anybody else they might have already... I feel His willpower held him together is all I could say, we can only hope it's enough to bring him back!" replies the doctor
  1. Kelvin_Sekwati7f
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    "Fine, I'll give you a job in Caxtec." she said and picked up her intercom. She then asked for an appointment letter. I rushed to her table and disconnected the line. She angrily rose from her seat, "What was that?"
  1. PrimordialDesolate
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    My favourite transports are BMW Ii8 with swarm swings doors, Aston Martin Rapide Luxe, Bentley continental GTC, Bugatti Veyron Vitesse, Ferrari 458 spider, Koenigsegg Agera R, Lamborghini Gallardo LPS70-4 Squadra Corsa, McLaren Mp4-12C, Mobile Elemment vita and Porsche 916 Spyder, Sikorsky s-92 and Gulfstream GIL.

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