From what I've read so far it's really good the only issue is the spelling and grammar. You have a good plot line and basic characters you will need to develop them more and double check for grammar
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Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact michelle1ringdom@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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