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review on 21/03/2021 @chap230 (released chap till date: 340)
review divided in:
Short review
Long review
IMO
Ratings
Conclusion
Warning (includes spoilers)
short review:
An original plot with a bad Harem story. Okayish world building with almost zero tension.
long review:
pros:
1) A complete original concept! Atleast to me this was the first time I ever read something like this. Well there are novels which have similar basics but this story is different from those things.
2) The world building is okayish. The power levels are clearly explained for each and every world. Different world, different power systems, different stage names. And with the plot that author is trying to make I know this ain't gonna be easy. But author could have worked more, but then again this novel is just around 20% completed I guess so we can expect more.
*SPOILER (not really)*
[The same thing, aiming for immortality, though not mentioned yet, but yeah that is where the novel is heading.... But then again almost all the novels have similar goals]
3) I am a harem supporter so yeah that's a plus from me. (Though I hate to say it, without harem this novel would have been much better. Contradictory? Can't help it...)
4) The story is surprisingly addicting. You might start to get bored but you can't leave this novel midpoint and would want to read more and more...
cons:
1) Almost zero character depth. Almost all the girls fall in love with MC at first sight. Well at first sight might be a little much but yeah it doesn't even take few chaps for them to fall for MC. And surprisingly no girls are against it.
2) This is a light hearted novel. There is almost no tension. At least I never felt any tension. You know everything is gonna be ok at the end.
3) You can't feel much emotions from the side characters or Harem. Except for blush of girls and sometimes little sadness if girls when mc leaves them. This is 1st POV so yeah don't expect other people views.
4) all girls are super beauties, this is a harem so you can expect it... But why all the girls blush everytime MC make some move against them. Not any bold girls out there? Would love to have more types of girls.
5) Harem: yeah i came mainly for Harem so i added it as cons but this novel would have been better without Harem, atleast that is what I felt...
6) [Not really a CONS] Plot armor, this novel is full of plot armor but again that doesn't really matter since almost all novels have plot armors. But there are really many things done for plot convenience.
IMO:
- A little more romance would have been better... Well I came here after reading your stealing spree... So yeah author- you can guess why I wanted more Romance.
- And hey just my opinion but why don't you add someone's opinion in some bonus chaps, like others pov as a side chap, I think readers might love it. Well just my opinion so yeah you can ignore it...
Conclusion:
This is a good time pass. If you can bear starting 20 or so chapters where I found MC a little annoying then yeah this is a good read.
A 4 from me instead of 3.5 in the rating since i am biased xD.
WARNING:
*SPOILER (not exactly)*
- MC is somewhere between hero and anti hero, consciously or subconsciously & due to various circumstances mostly leaning towards hero... Sometimes he is cold and badass tho, an inconsistent personality which I actually like it....
I agree with what some of the other readers have said. Starting out, there is a little problem with the development of the harem members. Some of that gets resolved in later chapters. One thing it didn't like was that just like someone else said, it seems like the author wants to make it so one person from every world is "in love" with the mc. I'm all for the harem thing, but even so, that would be in my opinion too much.
letting us see the character develop and grow stronger is actually pretty good I like the fact that he's growing and exploring all of his possibilities I guess
So ill start with the postives and ill work into the things i think need work
You have a good system style for the system genre i like the style of rapid growth with small bonuses collected from multiple worlds style
I love your world building so far you could probably be a very talented DM for dungeons and dragons and i respect the quality
Your male characters overwhelmingly are well written and varied even the assholeish Second hero
Cons- mostly just to deal with the AMOUNT of harem girls you seem to have planned its overwhelming and itll be impossible to even remeber their names i think if you are seriously planning for 60 girls
And this brings up the other topics even the “main Wife” vibe character just screams generic harem fodder your female characters need some variance because even the stealth girl in the second world i literally saw the begrudging attraction first chapter after their meeting i can accept fate makes these girls fall for protagonist but it needs some more finesse to not just have the worst self fulfillment fanfic vibe
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Sometimes he's taking in past tense,
Sometimes future tense, or he just straight up combined all the tense in one single paragraph.
Because of that it's hard and confusing to understand what he's trying to say.(at least for me)
But other than that the story is pretty good.
it is too slow for my taste
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review on 21/03/2021 @chap230 (released chap till date: 340)
review divided in:
Short review
Long review
IMO
Ratings
Conclusion
Warning (includes spoilers)
short review:
An original plot with a bad Harem story. Okayish world building with almost zero tension.
long review:
pros:
1) A complete original concept! Atleast to me this was the first time I ever read something like this. Well there are novels which have similar basics but this story is different from those things.
2) The world building is okayish. The power levels are clearly explained for each and every world. Different world, different power systems, different stage names. And with the plot that author is trying to make I know this ain't gonna be easy. But author could have worked more, but then again this novel is just around 20% completed I guess so we can expect more.
*SPOILER (not really)*
[The same thing, aiming for immortality, though not mentioned yet, but yeah that is where the novel is heading.... But then again almost all the novels have similar goals]
3) I am a harem supporter so yeah that's a plus from me. (Though I hate to say it, without harem this novel would have been much better. Contradictory? Can't help it...)
4) The story is surprisingly addicting. You might start to get bored but you can't leave this novel midpoint and would want to read more and more...
cons:
1) Almost zero character depth. Almost all the girls fall in love with MC at first sight. Well at first sight might be a little much but yeah it doesn't even take few chaps for them to fall for MC. And surprisingly no girls are against it.
2) This is a light hearted novel. There is almost no tension. At least I never felt any tension. You know everything is gonna be ok at the end.
3) You can't feel much emotions from the side characters or Harem. Except for blush of girls and sometimes little sadness if girls when mc leaves them. This is 1st POV so yeah don't expect other people views.
4) all girls are super beauties, this is a harem so you can expect it... But why all the girls blush everytime MC make some move against them. Not any bold girls out there? Would love to have more types of girls.
5) Harem: yeah i came mainly for Harem so i added it as cons but this novel would have been better without Harem, atleast that is what I felt...
6) [Not really a CONS] Plot armor, this novel is full of plot armor but again that doesn't really matter since almost all novels have plot armors. But there are really many things done for plot convenience.
IMO:
- A little more romance would have been better... Well I came here after reading your stealing spree... So yeah author- you can guess why I wanted more Romance.
- And hey just my opinion but why don't you add someone's opinion in some bonus chaps, like others pov as a side chap, I think readers might love it. Well just my opinion so yeah you can ignore it...
RATINGS:
writing: 7.5/10
update: 9/10
plot: 8/10
characters: 7.5/10
pacing: 7.5/10
dialogues: 7/10
entertainment: 7/10
OVERALL: 3.8/5
Conclusion:
This is a good time pass. If you can bear starting 20 or so chapters where I found MC a little annoying then yeah this is a good read.
A 4 from me instead of 3.5 in the rating since i am biased xD.
WARNING:
*SPOILER (not exactly)*
- MC is somewhere between hero and anti hero, consciously or subconsciously & due to various circumstances mostly leaning towards hero... Sometimes he is cold and badass tho, an inconsistent personality which I actually like it....
GIF: Chandler from Friends because he is the best
You have a good system style for the system genre i like the style of rapid growth with small bonuses collected from multiple worlds style
I love your world building so far you could probably be a very talented DM for dungeons and dragons and i respect the quality
Your male characters overwhelmingly are well written and varied even the assholeish Second hero
Cons- mostly just to deal with the AMOUNT of harem girls you seem to have planned its overwhelming and itll be impossible to even remeber their names i think if you are seriously planning for 60 girls
And this brings up the other topics even the “main Wife” vibe character just screams generic harem fodder your female characters need some variance because even the stealth girl in the second world i literally saw the begrudging attraction first chapter after their meeting i can accept fate makes these girls fall for protagonist but it needs some more finesse to not just have the worst self fulfillment fanfic vibe
Also I'm here because of the author..
Keep churning out the chapters author.
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