Not a terrible concept, but your grammar leaves much to be desired. Consider taking a few days off to edit your entire story. Also consider creating a table of contents and/or an addendum of power levels.
Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
I usually don’t even review.. so takes mine as gospel 🌚Jokes aside. So far so good definitely seems like it’s finna have massive potential and a huge world.. so look forward too that.. Also Fox is actually one of the few decent writers on this app. Especially when it comes to making a true villain like character.. I would also recommend you read his other work Now I’m not gonna lie if you don’t like true villians, and I’m not talking about those fake villians.. this story might not be for you cuz Fox makes his portags extra extra evillll 👺
Lachlan really couldn't get enough of this so-called king; he really placed himself on such a high pedestal. Placing him above heroes, people that were supposed to be world saviours and whatnot.
Kyle paused for a second to check Anne reaction before continuing his story. Anne looked shocked cause all this stuff was the event that happened at her previous life so that could only mean that Kyle knew about her rebirth or Kyle was reborn just like her but what could have led to his death but she just pushed the thought away and waited for Kyle to continue his story
I knew the Plaza like the back of my hand. These were directions I had gotten to know over the many times I'd eaten here. Turning my head to the side, I glanced to make sure she was beside me and noticed the way our steps synced in the process.
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