I see a writeup with bright future here. you are doing well , the story development is okay, it captivated me at first sight, but the only downside to your work is the lack of a stable update. you should try and improve in your updates. howbeit, this is a great work.i'm looking forward to seeing the writer and his novel improve.
As usual shameless author review here. I’m new as an author so mistakes are bound to happen, but don’t worry I will definitely improve as times goes by. So critics are welcome! i look forward to your support, and suggestions.
author are you kidding me? what are you doing extending chapters like you are gonna write 10000 . you are making it soo boring . even though im holding my anger back its so annoying . mc is weak af. i thought there was multiple planets, which means there is 100 star people. mc is struggling at 3 star. something that needs 2 chapter max is extended to 20 chapter..... the h is this
When this was all done, he would make sure Delacroix had something nice and shiney to add to her collection at home to show her how much he appreciated her.
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