The Transmigrated Immortal Woman Is Not to Be Messed With

I enjoy age progression cultivation novels, but after reading this one, I have several complaints:

- There's too much unnecessary dialogue.
- NPCs and bystanders, even children, often become commentators watching the show.
- There are many plot holes.
- The main character is reckless and overconfident.
- The villains are brainless and eagerly come forward to be humiliated.
- Characters' thoughts, especially those of the villains, are often spoken aloud.
- The main character is a Mary Sue.
- The villains follow the same script.
- The goals of the villains are absurd.
- All characters seem to have low IQs.
- The same routine becomes boring.
- There's too much face slapping.
- The fighting style is long-winded.
- Fights often drag on before the enemy suddenly powers up or gets seriously injured due to their own carelessness, only then quickly trying to finish off the enemy (repetitive).
- The author tries to build emotionally touching scenes but fails.
- I don't mind if the main character is brilliant, but why aren't the other characters smart too?
- Most side characters have copy-pasted personalities.
- The main character has strong plot armor.

Oh NO!!! Dont leave Amor Zeve...But on the other hand Im truly excited what the author will unfold if Zeve will leave

This is such an intense and emotional love story! It’s packed with drama, raw emotions, hope, love, heartache, heartbreak, coming of age, and a roller coaster of highs and lows. “When a man loves a woman” comes to mind! I thoroughly recommend it!