This novel is... Not great. The grammar Is so painfully bad that I can’t actually read anymore. Mistakes here and there are fine, but literally every sentence takes me out of it. Please if you write a book at least use grammarly or something. Also the writing has been... bad. Often times the author skips foreshadowing and straight up says “something is going to happen” before it happens and without foreshadowing. Its absolutely frustrating.
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I think ml and fl are strong but they are both lossers. They don't have any plan or strategy for their revenge and the other villains are stronger than the whole story. I got depressed and angry while reading this so i quit.
author here rating his own book 5 stars😅.hope you all enjoy Reading my creation.all of you deer readers are Light in the depth of the darkness.and enjoy👋
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