it's good got a potential but because if the gramar. naah your just a new writer right? just keep going I support you as long as you keep going dont stop
Making grammatical mistakes is fine since you're new and english isn't your main language. You're doing great for a first timer, so keep up the good work!
This has a good and nice plot with a lot of good characters but the author has a long way to go and grow it's a nice book but the grammar throws me off can't wait for future chaps
Are you looking for a time escape novel? well this is for you.
I must admit that the author really did a great job in writing this beautiful novel.
Everything is well explain, and despite the fact that this isn't my typical kind of story, I'm still going to read.
Ps. This novel will keep you to the edge (◔‿◔)
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I must admit that the author really did a great job in writing this beautiful novel.
Everything is well explain, and despite the fact that this isn't my typical kind of story, I'm still going to read.
Ps. This novel will keep you to the edge (◔‿◔)