The Thorned Empress: Echoes of her strength

A good story, indeed. ?

So gaming stories aren't really my thing but I will say this story was quite enjoyable. Really liked the plot (although I wish the blurb had been written better - it really undermines the story) and characters were amazing. I'm really curious about how the two characters are going to get on.Grammar was okay but there were times it was a little messy with missing punctuation and capital letters. Otherwise, I'm excited to see where this author takes this story.

I despise people who write a good review before even reading a novel, but now I have to do it too. To be fair I won't give it a five.Anyways, you deserve a 4-star, just by having a single fl, not having a harem is already a rare occurrence lol. I'll write a normal review later after reading some chapters, maybe after 50.

Good story but I doubt we will see the system before the 40 chapters are done and I think the world background needs to be more detailed but other then that pretty good

Very good story! it hooked me to the first chapter, the story stelling is good, world building is also good, I recommend reading this if you're bored

WARNING CONTENT OF THIS CHAPTER IS GRAPHIC  ( Very gory-ish)

"Unicorn, what ever is the matter, how did you become like this?" Asked the Eagle, trying to flaunt his charms off to the Owl.

"Nih kak, pake jaket Jeni biar ga masuk angin. Kan dingin.. jaket kakak tadi basah.." Jeni memberikan jaketnya pada Rezza.