I have to say that reading this brought a lot of nostalgia. It was only a few years ago that I've seen a the original charm of wuxia, xanxia, and all that.
This is a throwback novel against all the system, sign-in, and overpowered stuff that is hip nowadays.
It is funny that the nostalgia doesn't stop there. For people who read Machine Translations, this brings that vibe as there is still a lot of work that needs to be done with wording and all that. Spacing work needs a lot of polishing as well.
I trust the author would improve on that and I could only advice to use Grammarly if he could.
This book is really amazing! Its have been so long since I read a true Xianxia story and I can said that this novel have not disappointed me yet.The author make his mc grow slowly and with hard work even though he make his mc born with a strong bloodline and physique.
Other than that, this book also have a concept element.For example the mc who used spear as his weapon have comprehend a Spear Concept!
I just want to said that if anyone would like to read a Xianxia Story, I really recommend this book to you all.This book own a good character growth, steady update and long chapter.
i have to say i like the story itself but author you are focusing too much on filling chapters an entire just descriping the characters after about 2 to 5 chpaters i amnot saying it is a bad thing but too many times is annoying as of now i read about 70 chapters that could be written in 50 or less even on good way what's more almost every chapter when you make a change on the scene or switching between two scene you must start as an unknown figure then identifies it man that's honostly too much that's making it annoying too much annoying .
the grammers i rarely see a section with a good grammer almost every chapter is written badly pls revise them and thanks
In conjunction with the thirtieth chapter, I have decided to write my own review and I as the author of this novel, of course I need to give it Five stars :)
First, I want to said that as a new writer, I am really proud of my novel.Even though my English language is not really good, this book own the best of me.
Second,I am a fan of wuxia, xianxia and the rest of Chinese fantasy novels and because of that, I have decide to write my own novel.
Now, let's talk about the novel. Just like others wuxia or xianxia novel, my novel also will own young masters and face slapping but.....my novel will be a little different compare to others Xianxia and Wuxia novel because this novel won't have any harem and the main character of my novel also will be a coldblooded person who won't care about anyone else and will killed them if they harm his family.
My MC also only have one bloodline and one special physique,not like other mc in Xianxia and Wuxia novel who own a lot of bloodlines and special physiques.
Other than that, my mc also will use spear as his main weapon and maybe in the future he will have a second weapon as his secondary weapons but.. .who knows?
If you want to know more about this novel, keep reading!
I also really appreciate if there are some readers who comments and vote my novel:)
I like the story (I have read 130+ chapters) but there are two things that I don’t like and those are the long and unnecessary descriptions and the grammar. But at least the grammer is nothing major (at least the author does not confuse he and her pronouns). If minor grammar mistakes and long descriptions don’t bother you then you should give the story a try.
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This is a throwback novel against all the system, sign-in, and overpowered stuff that is hip nowadays.
It is funny that the nostalgia doesn't stop there. For people who read Machine Translations, this brings that vibe as there is still a lot of work that needs to be done with wording and all that. Spacing work needs a lot of polishing as well.
I trust the author would improve on that and I could only advice to use Grammarly if he could.
Other than that, this book also have a concept element.For example the mc who used spear as his weapon have comprehend a Spear Concept!
I just want to said that if anyone would like to read a Xianxia Story, I really recommend this book to you all.This book own a good character growth, steady update and long chapter.
the grammers i rarely see a section with a good grammer almost every chapter is written badly pls revise them and thanks
First, I want to said that as a new writer, I am really proud of my novel.Even though my English language is not really good, this book own the best of me.
Second,I am a fan of wuxia, xianxia and the rest of Chinese fantasy novels and because of that, I have decide to write my own novel.
Now, let's talk about the novel. Just like others wuxia or xianxia novel, my novel also will own young masters and face slapping but.....my novel will be a little different compare to others Xianxia and Wuxia novel because this novel won't have any harem and the main character of my novel also will be a coldblooded person who won't care about anyone else and will killed them if they harm his family.
My MC also only have one bloodline and one special physique,not like other mc in Xianxia and Wuxia novel who own a lot of bloodlines and special physiques.
Other than that, my mc also will use spear as his main weapon and maybe in the future he will have a second weapon as his secondary weapons but.. .who knows?
If you want to know more about this novel, keep reading!
I also really appreciate if there are some readers who comments and vote my novel:)