Hmm. This story has an interesting read. Someone who becomes a sword, I can't wait to see how he will live his life.
The mc too has an interesting character and can be fleshen up more. The introduction of the world background is also written well. The narratives too is easy portrayed to the readers.
Writing quality, there are grammatical errors though it didn't much hinder you to enjoy reading this but you could still improve it.
Overall, this book has a great and interesting start. I love to see this one grow more chapters and a must keep in my collections.
And if you are a fan of transmigration and cultivation stories, then this one is definitely recommended.
Alright guys, as a shameless author I will support my work and rate it 5 star... without wasting any time let me just give the pros and cons according to what I feel.
Pros:
1) for those looking for strong mc not op and transmigration novel this is for you.
2) I have planned for a harem novel and it might be a little big.
3) Mc is neither a saint nor a pure evil. I will also making it sure everything that happens now and later will make sense.
4) there won't be any plot armour. mc won't gain sudden strength.
cons:
1) I am a new author and english is not my first language so there might be few grammatical errors.
2) for harem haters this is totally not for you.. but if you can ignore the harem part then maybe this will be an interesting read
Alright that's it... thank you for reading and supporting my work...
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I absolutely like your idea of making the MC as a sword. Your way of explanation and storytelling is indeed easy for me to understand it. The grammar in the earlier chapters has some problems, but it seems that the later chapters has good grammar.
I like this novel but it stretches too much in uninteresting parts. I think the novel will develop quite good but the info dumbs are seriously annoying :(
Let's hope that author can increase his pace because story's really good and it's pretty boring to wait :(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(::(:(:(::(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:((::(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:((:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:((:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(
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The mc too has an interesting character and can be fleshen up more. The introduction of the world background is also written well. The narratives too is easy portrayed to the readers.
Writing quality, there are grammatical errors though it didn't much hinder you to enjoy reading this but you could still improve it.
Overall, this book has a great and interesting start. I love to see this one grow more chapters and a must keep in my collections.
And if you are a fan of transmigration and cultivation stories, then this one is definitely recommended.
Keep it up author!
Pros:
1) for those looking for strong mc not op and transmigration novel this is for you.
2) I have planned for a harem novel and it might be a little big.
3) Mc is neither a saint nor a pure evil. I will also making it sure everything that happens now and later will make sense.
4) there won't be any plot armour. mc won't gain sudden strength.
cons:
1) I am a new author and english is not my first language so there might be few grammatical errors.
2) for harem haters this is totally not for you.. but if you can ignore the harem part then maybe this will be an interesting read
Alright that's it... thank you for reading and supporting my work...
Thanx for the work
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Yeah...not new but this book has taken it to another level....
I enjoyed the story (still am)
The author is amazing...
I don't think this book needs convincing others to read it.