It's really a cool book for those of you that love baseball. It's a lovely one to me despite not being a sport person. I didn't expect I'd be saying this. The book is that good.By the way, I'd shamelessly share my book, you guys should check out Who?¿ if you have time. It's nothing of sport but I hope you'd like it
The book is amazing, characters are well placed. I love the twist in it, cheating to save your marriage. Dean plays as the world's best best friend always there for Cerian. I'm just sad Kairan didn't end up with Cerian.
I only gave 3 stars to story development and character design. This is your average novel and it is already 38 chapters on RoyalRoad and it is the extremely slow pace.I felt potential in this novel and it is fucking too normal. MC is pretty calm and his past self is plainly stupid but he became mature after that. This novel has so much potential but author only used typical trophies that you can find.The problem of this novel is too slow and the chapters are very short. I recommend future readers. come back here after this novel's chapters accumulate to over 100 chapters.
The setting reminds me of the legendary mechanic but with a fantasy theme added, similarly there are game elements along a promise of players coming in a year time. There are also elves royalties among other things, with the beginning being more of the mc building up his inherited village than solo play.
So far I absolutely love the story. I have been waiting for a more western light novel and I am hoping that you can give this to me. But so far so good ;).
If this doesn't deserve a review, what does? Rhetorical question please do not stoop down and correct a potato. Let the potato speak his words freely. The potato needs chapters as evolution material as he is a high ranking potato. He is actually the #0 ranker, check it. I'm just rambling for 140 characters.
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