Came read this because I thought it would be like greatest of all time but I was disappointed he is mediocre like he has no special skill to him he gets ball stolen from can’ score like the list goes on
Ok. So here's my review, this is story is in a cultivation world setting. Apart from me liking cultivation stories, I like the MC because he is simple. He shows kindness to the people who show him kindness and he became cunning to those who tried to oppressed him and his brother. He is also someone who strives to become strong. He is stubborn but I like it anyway. I somehow find it funny and interesting because he usually does things that are unconventional. So, far, I like this story.
The story is very good. Unlike 99% of the stories on this site, this one is very well written so far. The main protagonist is not brain dead and can think. So far there has been no romance that drags down the story. His system is pretty well done and not annoying. The world background is well told and diverse. Overall a very good read. Keep up with the updates!.
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