So nice story, I like the idea and the story, but I dont know about the grammar, it is something between normal and mtl level.The author after hundreds of chapters still has no clue how time works, he does so many mistakes, its absurd.Sometimes he use present and simple past in one sentence, the future and simple past in one sentence, some chapters, I cant really read them because they are so many mistakes!Author get a proof reader, use some apps to help you or some AI idk, just get better
Author with questionable amounts of shame here! If anyone is going to review my book, it should be me, right? Well, the writing quality is superb, the Stability of Updates is simply spectacular. I'm enjoying the Story Development and the designs of each character, and the World Background is awesome! In all seriousness, just give it a chance, this is my first work, and any interaction goes a long way. So read it! Recommend it to others! Leave a review and many comments!
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