it actually is a good story honestly not going to lie it does have similarities to a few stories like this the good thing about this one is it stays at a steady pace doesn't go too fast it doesn't drag not a lot of over explaining definitely one I can come back to on a later date
Pretty good I like it. One issue I have is the importance the author and MC put on family yet the is essentially 0 interactions between them. I mean after his dad got crippled there was not even a single line of dialogue between them. The lack of interaction between characters in general is a general issue, but between him and his parent who he is supposedly cherishing is just lazy.
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