You should keep it up. It is a good story plot. A deviation from the normal story lines of web novels and xianxia stories. I am waiting for the next chapters.
This work deserves a five star work. Just first two chapters are sufficient enough to rate this wonderful workpiece. The author has described the MC in an expressive way. The world background is fabulous. Thanks for creating this work.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
A good and refreshing story about a Moron/Naive in a cultivation story
The MC have only his detection of lie and with that he want to reach a greater strength and it's the difference between this and other cultivation story not scheming or false "good MC" .
The MC in this story is naive and that will create some new opportunities and other difficulty that don't have other MC for example :
If he want something he tell it ,unlike other cultivation story ,that don't revelate anything because of the sensibility of the information
You did a good job puting the book together and making sure all of the details are put together really well. The book is really good and I really like it a lot.
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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The MC have only his detection of lie and with that he want to reach a greater strength and it's the difference between this and other cultivation story not scheming or false "good MC" .
The MC in this story is naive and that will create some new opportunities and other difficulty that don't have other MC for example :
If he want something he tell it ,unlike other cultivation story ,that don't revelate anything because of the sensibility of the information
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.