Solid world building. Love the prehistoric start, it makes the start very unique! It is nicely written, not too hard on the eye. Like the novel very much!
at first, the story is good but it downgraded when suddenly the author suddenly change his troupe to a medieval fantasy world where demon lord, heroes, knights mages to a cultivation like novel, you know the usual troupe where he meets the mysterious grandpa in the park with his granddaughter practicing but the MC criticized the girl martial art in his head and the girl notice throw an almost tantrums but grandpa stop her and MC sat on the tree cultivate grandpa notices his cultivation amaze and etc etc where MC show his might, go to the auction face slap like usual in the eastern cultivation novel, maybe there'll be a youngmaster, the offend, kill, offend again then kill again
This is one of the most unique novel i have read . the world building is solid and characters emotions can be feel . keep up the good work and i want more more More MOre MORe MORE MORE MOREEE MOR
I know, I know, shameless self-review... but hey, anything else would only be hypocrisy on my part... why would anyone rate his own work as anything but close and dear to his heart?
Anyway, I wouldn't want to spoil too much but figured some of my planned thoughts (at the time of writing this, the novel has just been posted) would serve as a good indication if you would like to give the story a try, or mayhaps not. Both are fine, and while I would miss you, my dear potential reader, in case you would decide to abandon me, I would respect your decision.
At the very least, please give me the courtesy of telling me the reason, so I could continue to drive myself forward and improve! Writing is not just my passion, but currently, in these dark times, my only solace!
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When you check in for the first few chapters, you might grow confused and ask yourself: "Is this really a modern day, urban fantasy story? Why are we starting from the prehistoric era then? What is going on?
Relax, my dear potential friend, there is nothing wrong! The first few chapters, serving as a sort of first mini-arc, will be playing out in the far past, showing an initial journey of self-growth and introduction to Aziel as an individual.
I do not plan to push it for too long, but there are a few interesting ideas that were never explored in these novels, and I had this itch...
As for the rest, this novel being a genuine submission for WPC #238 you may have an idea of where we are going. If not, or if you are reading this far in the future (...how's it there by the way? Is this stupid pandemic still raging on?), then allow me to copy the contest details here, as it would speak more without spoiling anything.
"Male Lead - Strong Acting Weak
Don't judge a book by its cover. Someone who seems weak and pathetic might just turn out to be an almighty person concealing his overwhelming strength."
I was wondering why this resembled revenant so much lol, same author.
Hope this one last longer mate, also love that it doesn't have any fanfic qualities. Good for you and building a proper novel you can legallyy sell
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I know, I know, shameless self-review... but hey, anything else would only be hypocrisy on my part... why would anyone rate his own work as anything but close and dear to his heart?
Anyway, I wouldn't want to spoil too much but figured some of my planned thoughts (at the time of writing this, the novel has just been posted) would serve as a good indication if you would like to give the story a try, or mayhaps not. Both are fine, and while I would miss you, my dear potential reader, in case you would decide to abandon me, I would respect your decision.
At the very least, please give me the courtesy of telling me the reason, so I could continue to drive myself forward and improve! Writing is not just my passion, but currently, in these dark times, my only solace!
---
When you check in for the first few chapters, you might grow confused and ask yourself: "Is this really a modern day, urban fantasy story? Why are we starting from the prehistoric era then? What is going on?
Relax, my dear potential friend, there is nothing wrong! The first few chapters, serving as a sort of first mini-arc, will be playing out in the far past, showing an initial journey of self-growth and introduction to Aziel as an individual.
I do not plan to push it for too long, but there are a few interesting ideas that were never explored in these novels, and I had this itch...
As for the rest, this novel being a genuine submission for WPC #238 you may have an idea of where we are going. If not, or if you are reading this far in the future (...how's it there by the way? Is this stupid pandemic still raging on?), then allow me to copy the contest details here, as it would speak more without spoiling anything.
"Male Lead - Strong Acting Weak
Don't judge a book by its cover. Someone who seems weak and pathetic might just turn out to be an almighty person concealing his overwhelming strength."
Hope this one last longer mate, also love that it doesn't have any fanfic qualities. Good for you and building a proper novel you can legallyy sell