Honestly I was hoping this would be a good read and it seemed like it was off to a good start but way to many errors and POV changes at the drop of a hat with no indication of the change. By about Ch 20 I found it al but unreadable.
The novel is by far interesting but I can say much about it as it is still new and few chapters and yeah also sometimes it's confusing who is speaking. *Give me more*
Sadly the characters seam very one-dimensional and it doesn’t help that the author decided to make the mc so op (tens of times the power of other people at the same realm) that long-lasting allies are simply impossible because he can do everything by himself way better.
The title and book cover attracted me, and I can say the Author prepared for this very well. I like how she write the story, Very well written. This novel is gold. Hope to see more chapters 🙂
Definitely a unique story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading.
La verdad es que no he leído ni un capitulo pero es eilion, con su nombre sabemos que es pura calidad y waifus.Cuando se junten unos pocos cientos de capítulos me tirare mi maraton y a cruzar los dedos para el harem que SE q estará presente por más que digas en un inicio qque no
The start was great but he slowly loses his character and the story development becomes weird and un-understandable. Slowly I feel like his goal is not to be immortal it's weird he has a disciple or love interest I don't understand what's going on.
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