The String Age : How A New Force Changed Everything

First thing, I love to applaud you with the concept. For me, it's new, unusual and I never heard of it before. The thing about sci-fictions today are the ideas seemed identical so reading your novel was refreshing to me. Another is I love how you already put distinctive traits for each character you presented which makes us readers easier to differentiate with them and note them individually. And what I like the most is how you lay the events perfectly that lead to string age. It helped put depth, add mystery and stir my curiosity. What I'd kindly suggest is apply flashback rather than descriptive explanation of the past(though, it's up to you especially if that's just your style) because I personally think it has more feels. Nonetheless, I had no problem with grammar or mechanics because I honestly didn't see errors on those. Ultimately, kudos! I really admire sci-fi writers because I believe they had the hardest time. Anyway, keep the fire in you burning!

Actually, I'm not really into sci-fi and mystery stories but I've read a few. This story starts out slow but flows smoothly with no sense of interruption between the dialogues and the scene playing in the plot. The characters are distinguished well with their own features and their interactions and reactions are very realistic which makes it easier for the readers to engage with the plot. I love how you describe the actions and the event with simple words but gives a very detailed image in our mind. There are no grammar errors, which is really a plus point. I make mistakes in grammar sometimes too and correcting them really is tiring xD and reading a story with too many spelling mistakes or grammar errors just makes the reading experience feel bland. So I really love this. The author has a good writing style and it keeps the readers at the hook to know what really is going on. I enjoyed reading the first few chapters and I will read the rest as well when I have more time. Great job! ^^

The author have the ingredient on writing the story, the author's writing style is descriptive! With the author's writing style, I can hear the sound and I  can imagine the surroundings.

On the synopsis, the author wrote if you are into  "realistic fantasy powered by science", I think that's cool

from what I've read, this is a very intriguing story. it started off slow, but I prefer my stories like this, so it was a plus for me. I didn't get bored during this, and blew threw a bunch of chapters at one go without realizing it. I love the sci-fi aspect, especially the black hole. astronomy lover you see. and if u love sci-fi, like me, you should totally read this!

The interactions of the four main characters are truly realistic, it felt like these buddies are your best friends! Yes, I mean it, the dialogues are blending with great execution on what conversations should be, what the talks in real life should be. 

All of those are thanks to the author's writing quality, as well as the style. Try to spot the grammatical errors, but you can't! 

Oh, you realized that this novel is powered by science, physics, and stuff? Don't be afraid of that, the way the narratives are written will allow you to understand them without the help of google's assistance.

I wonder why the heck those things got stuck in the mid-air. Fantasy strings? Quantum strings? I don't know. Read it to find out!

The pacing of the story is quite slow, but i do like that they harnessed a new kind of energy, The writing quality is superb and the premise is excellent overall it's a good read, Keep up the good work author! Kudos to you!

Great story! Though I don't read much book I will look forward to it. And also I like the way you write. I will learn from your writing skill by reading your book. Keep it up! I cheer you!

Brilliant work author. Adding a new force huh. In my next life if I'll have to study about this force too, believe me I'll not forget cursing you too. Btw nice to meet Paul, unlike yours my Paul is really in s/m stuff and I can really relate to Julien we think alike especially in football.
Anyway about your work, well it's good, I enjoyed, the only complaint from my side is the names of some of the characters, Paul, Julien okay but Alit.... Aldre... see I can't even write those names much less remember or speak. Well it's my problem I think.
Anyway, the story is smooth and you have an amazing world building and character designs are pretty good too. There were some grammer issues but since I myself is bad at it so I'm not sure if I can say it's error.
All in all a good read and definitely awesome for someone who is into science and for those who are not in science like me, you too should read it, either you'll start loving science or hating it all together. In the end I'll just say dear author please update it more regularly.