this is gold.worth the readthe story is quite unique for me.though the MC has a cheat but it doesn't make him OP.the story has a lot of potential, room to grow and development to make
Worst translation I ve seen. ”he” becomes “she” on the next line and comes back to ”he” later. ”soul condensation” becomes “spirit refinement” then “soul refinement”. Can’t remember all but last is “ye cheng” becoming “ye city” and “flat river dynasty” becoming “ping jiang dynasty. The story is still pretty good but the translation is even worse than google translate
Overall it's pretty decent, with fun and likable characters and a somewhat interesting world. Though the dialogue feels bad since they talk exposition most of the time, it is still an enjoyable read.There are a few issues with the writing, as there are sometimes missing or misplaced commas, periods, apostrophes, and etc. Along with some missing words.Though it's not a big deal as I can still understand it, it does ruin the flow and takes you out of the book.I recommend using grammarly and a bit of proofreading.
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