The Stepmother Who Raises Cute Children and the Crazy Bigshot Who Spoils Her Endlessly (70s)

The story is going on Amazing

Impossible to readLook into getting an editor or using grammarlyIdk why thats so hard for most people on this site. i wont read this again until it has better grammar

I do no know exactly where this is going, but as of now it is the best of the batch that I have read.  It is actually fun to read and has an amusing concept, where the heroine is a regressor who has the memory of the MC turning out to be a demon lord type character.  She is spending time with him, looking for evidence and trying to kill him in ways that do not implicate her or would put her at risk.  The MC has a 'system' that gives him points for his activities throughout the day.  For most activities he can get .01-.02 points a day.  When interacting with her he finds that he gets .1 or more points for even comments that she makes to him.  This means that instead of spending 12 hours to get .01 points he can spend 1 minute and get .1 point or more.  He has no idea that he is being treated as a demon, while his actions are confusing his senior sister the first heroine of the story.At this point I am looking forward to reading more of this one.

Unbelievably slow pacing. The MC registers for a fight in chapter six. The fight in question is scheduled to take place later on the same day. By chapter twenty, the MC still hasn't participated in the fight, and only a couple hours have passed since the events of chapter six.

This is the Author himself I don't want to spoil the book, so I will not mention anything about it , except to say I have the outlines for the next three books (including this one) written and developed. There is a lot to it , but I don't like revealing it all at once , it will slowly expand as the story progresses.

Here I am... Again!  I like your writing style as already said...You don't struggle, like most of us (no engish speakers), with tenses, style or grammar. This is your advantage over most of the authors on Webnovel. You use it for the perfect! Your story has everything a good novel should has (interesting storyline, expressive charcters, etc.) Definitely, you can write! Nicely!

"I don't know why you do that," Gene told him as they walked in Chief Hoover's office. "You know we wouldn't be able to access this floor if they did not allow us to."

I was at her mercy, and in some corner of my mind I should've been more afraid, but given the discussions between me and auntie, the Liu Erlong she knew didn't seem to bear any hostilities with our sect specifically. That, and I also liked what she was doing with her academy, so I was rather in favor—not counting her good looks—of an amiable relationship with her in the future. Not that kind of relationship, but I wasn't closing that door off just yet.