Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
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First off, I absolutely love your book cover it's really cool. I like your plot and it's concept. The character build-up is also very good. You're doing a good job, keep it up.
I like how the author executes the storyline as if you're on the water slide while you're reading this! So smooth! And that's because how the narratives are written so well that you will be directly sent inside the story itself. Yes, I mean it.
As for the characters, I can tell the author put a lot of efforts into making them as realistic as they should. You can feel them as if they're beside you.
All around a fantastic read, the imagery is amazing, and i found myself laughing throughout. The plot is entangling, and Keeps you coming back for more.
Haha don't know where to begin with this one. A very fun read with a plot that is still developing at the point I stopped reading. Humor is the driving force in this one with some terrific banter and dialogue coming through with the zany character interactions. I especially enjoyed the prologue chapter with the FBI-like group of aliens meeting to discuss some concerning events. Very well-written with great flowing prose. This is one talented author with a very vivid imagination at play. I've added this to my library as I have to see where he goes with all this. Anybody thinking about reading this, give it a go! You're guaranteed to have many laugh out loud moments!
2 Votes from me I hope you win the contest. Overall the story is developing quite nicely. I like the flow and vibe. [img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]
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Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
This is my review! Hope you like it!
I love the idea of the story, especially its Sci-fi. I love the character's development, the storyline is perfect.
Job well done, Author.
As for the characters, I can tell the author put a lot of efforts into making them as realistic as they should. You can feel them as if they're beside you.
What are you waiting for? Read this now!