Acceptable, but not more than average. I dislike the excessive interaction with the modern world, hell, I hate the fact that he's even able to travel back and forth, I am especially disgusted with the fact that he's even introducing stuff from the fantasy world to the modern world and not only the other way around. He's kind of living a double life, so this novel is half on earth half in a fantasy world.The comedy is kinda subpar, it's really not that good. The mc himself is a somewhat worthless human being with no talents, no real courage and low intelligence, but he can succeed in life because he's capable of, that's right, pretending to be knowledgeable/amazing by using modern day information or magic world items, none of which has anything to do with him. He didn't even think twice before showing around some magic drugs in the modern world that can instantly(almost) heal injuries and trying to mass-produce and sell them, but of course there'll be no issues, since everyone is flowery retards in this world and nothing bad will likely ever happen. He can bring over everything he touches at the time of transfer which happens every three days on the dot, I guess he'll start bringing in guns, cars, modern farm equipment and even people later on, geez. The characters are quite flat, I don't feel as if they're living at all, they feel way too 2d. The world is similarly uninteresting.Overall, this is a novel that isn't worth reading, at least not for me. It's not the worst I've seen, but it's really not a novel that I'd waste my time on and I freaking read 1600 chapters of MGA before I got so fed up with that garbage I quit, so that says something. This novel has similarly flat characters and a mc with sh*t for brains(no offense), but it also a chaotic setting where "everything goes and everything just falls in place without any issues
woooooa the author really inproved from the firatbnovel he wrote , good writing style and good story , i feel like i can't put it down .guyyys make sure to give it a try
Author Note: I am writing as a hobby but I tried to do things professionally. Although I need to work on my grammar more, my story is still readable and written in detail. I rate my review Writing Quality 3 stars because it is only average writing quality with quite a lot grammar mistakes. However, if I'm a person that just curing from dyslexia could read the novel without much difficulty, I'm sure other won't have it hard to read the story either.My grammar needs improvement but I don’t have a teacher to teach me, so I don’t mind it if you rate me badly because of my grammar since I understand that it’s important for the reader to read the novel. Just don’t expect for it to get any better if you don’t plan on helping me. Like I say, I don’t have a teacher to teach me grammar. I couldn’t see the mistake when I’m writing and re-reading so, you cannot hope for too much. Stability of Updates, I must rate it 5 stars because 1 chapter a day and if there are a lot chapters in stock I will update 2-5 chapter on Sunday or sometimes on Saturday too. Its depend on my mood, really but it can never be lower than one chapter a day. So, I must say that it is as stable as translator translating an available novel.Story Development 4 stars. Don't ask me why. I just liked how my story is developing. Why it lack one more star? Because it is not quite detail enough unlike professional novels.Character design 4 stars. I love my characters, naturally 4 stars. Why it lack one more star? Similar to the above, it is not quite detail enough but in the future, I will improve on this surely.World Background 4 Stars. No reason, just 4 stars.Source of inspiration: Library of Heaven Path, History's Number 1 Founder, Tales of Demons and GodsDisclaimer: I don't have the basic knowledge of Xianxia so do forgive me for that. I only know Xianxia from reading novels so my knowledge can be lacking. However, it is a certain that this novel is more of Xuanhuan than Xianxia. That novel cover, I owned it. I'm the one that created it.Warning: It is Yaoi. If you don’t like Yaoi, you can still read because I think that some Xianxia and Xuanhuan have acceptable BL moment too. If there is NSFW scene I will warn beforehand. There will be a rate for Yaoi moment. One star to five stars. If it is too explicit, I will rate it five stars, if it just both men being naked but did nothing, I will rate it one star. If you hate Yaoi, then please, I’m politely escorting you out of my novel. Don’t ruin the review just because you hate Yaoi.You may ask whatever you want to ask in this review but make sure to be polite to everyone.
Seemingly endless rays of sunlight, filtered through the trees. A group of people were moving slowly along a barely noticeable path. Giant plants of all kinds were also growing along the path. The air was slightly humid, and it was stiflingly hot. The group of people consisted of 5 people, 2 girls and 3 boys. They all looked to be around 15 to 16 years of age.
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