Okay, so this book doesn’t have an original premise at all. BUT it is very, very well written using that premise. Also his to-be gf and him are so cute, I just love this book
please continue to write, I'm loving the story just got to page 718 without even realizing it. your story has amazing potential and endless possibilities.
Nyah i sense a shameless mc nyahh..i sense a scoundrel nyah..i hope this would be good...waiting for 100+chapa nyahhhhahahahahah nya nyahLets Spread the Nyahhhhh~
Hi, this is a honest review here.Writing quality : 3/5Update stability: 5/5Story development : 4/5character design : 3/5World background: 4/5The author is very passionate and love his work. However he is new to this. This book is atypical to ero books, with weak character designs- power mechanics and plots, but it is still a fun read. Sure around half the time the book is unrealistic and not immersive. But if you can treat this story as a pass time and not one of your favorites then, give this book a try.
I wanted to like it. and it's not like it's bad or anything, it's just far from what it could be. The mc got a pretty op pathon day one but never uses it. I think it was used only once or twice by chap 70 even though there's so much that it could be used for. instead, the mc is so reliant on the system for anything and everything, even stuff that his own power could be used for. This is supposed to be some top notch gamer but in his new world, all he does is basically use the wiki and a walkthrough. The mc needs to think for himself rather than have an all-knowing system spell every little thing out for him.--- Possibly spoiler below---back to his starting path, it's so op if he even thinks about it for a second. He can find literally anything he wants but instead uses the system for everything he could be doing himself. locate enemies nearby? his path could do it but uses the system instead. find an enemies weak point? that's something that his power could do. find a good place to cultivate? find some good treasure? find the beast core? find the best spot to hit the hammer while smithing? literally anything to do with locating something, he should be able to do with his path, yet he has the system to do all of that and more anyways. what's the point of giving him op powers if he literally never uses it?and look, maybe he finally decides to later on. who knows? he hasn't used it by chap 70 so anything else is just too late. too bad because it could have been much better
Overall it’s a very interesting novel I’m certainly going to recommend everyone to read.WQ 5/5 - I haven’t seen any grammar errors and everything is easy to read without any problems. US 4/5 - 3 chapters per week is quite a good number also chapters isn’t small.SD 5/5 - I’m only at chapter 18 so can’t say much about it but so far everything was interesting. CD 5/5 - Big thanks to author for adding the pictures of important characters. Also I think it will be a good idea to make auxiliary chapter for this. WB 5/5 - So far the world looks quite interesting, a good mix of fantasy with cultivation. Also the pictures of cities, castle and other staff greatly helps with immersion.
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