Shameless author here.
To readers, thanks for reading my story or even just the synopsis of my story. It's actually nothing great, cliches, grammar mistakes, name it, it's here. I wrote this for fun so don't expect anything great. I'm no professional author, so updates will be regular as long as I'm free and motivated. Thanks for understanding. Ciao.
Author here, being shameless again.
I'm trying to hit two birds with one stone here.
The two things I wanna say are 1.) The story is not a harem. I don't know why someone tagged it like that. Haha 2.) I regretted giving my novel four stars before so I'm now taking this chance to give it a 5 hahaha
THANKS BTW FOR READING THIS REVIEW AND STORY! <3 GUYS! XD
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The story in itself is not the great deal but, in my opinion ,the world is well build and the characters and their interaction seems quit real( for a r-18 novel),with a good writing quality(compared with most of the novels of this genre), so if you are an OPEN MIND person that just want to enjoy a good r-18 novel, I, sincerely recommend this novel.
It's a novel that started with fiery scenes and then stabilized through interconnected but easily followed mysteries. I love the main characters. They have no trust issue whatsoever. At least they won't fight over a very stupid misunderstanding. Er actually, they never even fight against each other. They only make love haha. But seriously, the story is a gem, whether you skip the rated scenes or not.
If I would say, it's not mainstream.
It uses the system niche. But the system in here has a lovable and hateful personality, maybe the closest one I know is the system in When a Mage Revolts.
MC has reasonable growth pace, imo. Also, she's not someone who just do what her system asked her to do. She weigh things out whether it's moral or not.
ML is mysterious, but not overbearing, tsundere, unreasonable, prone to misunderstadings
Side characters are also not static characters. They also grow and change. And they each have defined characteristics.
Villains are of course hateful. But thankfully, their ends are not cliche haha.
The story is quite interesting. This is an x-rated story. The description of the incident is very detail and words used are harsh and not suitable for some who cannot handle it. The story line portrays what is happening somewhere in the real world that other cannot see. It's dirty but it's reality. Some people are unfortunate to be in that life.
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To readers, thanks for reading my story or even just the synopsis of my story. It's actually nothing great, cliches, grammar mistakes, name it, it's here. I wrote this for fun so don't expect anything great. I'm no professional author, so updates will be regular as long as I'm free and motivated. Thanks for understanding. Ciao.
I'm trying to hit two birds with one stone here.
The two things I wanna say are 1.) The story is not a harem. I don't know why someone tagged it like that. Haha 2.) I regretted giving my novel four stars before so I'm now taking this chance to give it a 5 hahaha
THANKS BTW FOR READING THIS REVIEW AND STORY! <3 GUYS! XD
If I would say, it's not mainstream.
It uses the system niche. But the system in here has a lovable and hateful personality, maybe the closest one I know is the system in When a Mage Revolts.
MC has reasonable growth pace, imo. Also, she's not someone who just do what her system asked her to do. She weigh things out whether it's moral or not.
ML is mysterious, but not overbearing, tsundere, unreasonable, prone to misunderstadings
Side characters are also not static characters. They also grow and change. And they each have defined characteristics.
Villains are of course hateful. But thankfully, their ends are not cliche haha.