This one here had a great outlook and starting theme. Man, I thought I found something to spend my time on but .....Everything just blasted into a mess. The villains I.e. Fallen Angels can literally do anything and everything. They can summon any and every race of the universe when, author repeatedly emphasises that they are just one 9f the many successful races. They have control over a space nuke and I don't think it cost them a lot because they use it more frequently than a successful person goes on the vacation.The Mc the gets power ups and everything he needs just in time and money does not matter. He could get it from any of the four or five types of shops introduced till now. Like we have all conquering general shop then class shop, quest shops, Castle shops, auction houses, Kingdom shops and many more to be introduced. Then the gods are just a bunch of useless spectators who are also similarly all knowing. Author states that the modern chips have stopped working but I don't know why helicopters are still working along with its all systems intact. And then again Angels are and just referees but to me they seem to be amnipotent... And girls are just high on hormones....
The best HxH fanfic I've read so far. The author made the characters fit very well in the story and it added some fun while reading it. The node is new and well explained that it explain some differences in the original story. Good luck author and thank you for a great story.
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