Just started reading. The novel has potential. I can't say what the plot is but it will develop as one reads on. I would like to read further so have added the novel to my library.
This book has a lot of potential, The MC isn't conceited, show-off, or generic progatonist. He's patient and carefree, which emphasizes the humor behind his naivety. Haven't encountered face slapping scenes or other cliche events yet. It's quiet fun and refreshing to read, the MC's nonsense are pretty humorous and also characters' confusion and helplessness toward MC.
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Aaahh, finaly, i think this novel, Daedalus, and The Mech Touch are what makes Webnovel original novels the best new writer ones out there in the internet, there has been some jewels on RRL, but now it's time has passed, and there this new generation writers that are so amazing. Allright here's come my review.First off right on the bat, we get a nice prologue setup, that get us into the mood wanting to know more. The characters are getting fleshed out, somes not that much, it's the beginning of the novel, and there's tons of new characters, but what is really nice here, is you won't get one dimensional people in any point of the story. And that is great, there's tons of leads for many possible "main plots/sublots?".Well there's room for many things amazing things, as said, there's second role characters or even tird wheels, that feels like they want to "breaths" more into this story, giving it even mroe depths than it has at the moment.This leads to a conclusion where you got a badass MC, that use it's heads to use what he gots efficiently, without being a pushover nor a big studs rampaging everywhere, plus we got hints that his top aint it in the Universe, so as i said, it leads to a lot of promising futures.Dig into it! You won't be disapointed! Ah! and the Author is jsut so dedicated to this sotry, he works from 5 to 6, got family life with a new baby, writing this novel from 8 to 12pm, i mean come on, theres a patreon up, we all can share some loves to him as he does to us. BIG UP!
Author thank you for such a lovely book, as the story just started there is so much potential to explore.I love how author made MC reach out for the VR game. So lets hope MC builds an Epic business empire using his character.Keep writing, best of luck
This gets five stars from me for a number of simple reasons:- The writing is on point here. Transitions are smooth and nothing is rushed- Doesn't rush too much despite being a short story. The writing allows the build up as to what would happen next- Got some good showing and imagery going on. - This is a finished and completed work.
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