Amazing story .I am really fascinated by the cuteness of Yao ling .About Yao Ying I just want to say I love the way he loves his little wife.The way they address each other.The author has really created something extraordinary.
I like the cultivation system of mc in this novel. it's not just power increase but actual time paradox powers in the end.The story setup is also interesting.------------------Bad parts:repetitive story progression:mc cultivates -> moves to a higher tier dimension -> all enemies weaker than mc -> mc cultivates (it changes a bit when novel reaches its's end)
The author is trying to make an enjoyable storyline with many scammers and a villainess protagonist fighting to change his future and survive becoming the Emperor. Overall it's have many promising potential... But sadly the story progress is to slow for a modern reader like me to spend a time and coins just to read a meaningless chapter with no surprise element like any other cultivator storyline and this is not very impressive...
The novel is light-hearted and somewhat humorous.The typos and lack of capitalization are annoying, though. Feels like a first draft.Also you should flesh out the cultivation levels more.Keep working hard!!!
Is it allowed to just chatgpt all those chapter so they can be understandable ? Because I kind of hate machine translation way worse then any ai translation so will make my life way better
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