If you keep reading, the story will continue to be interesting that cannot be understood in one or two chapters, the ahead you read, the more interesting the story will be. In many places, I found unnecessary capitalization, along with many spelling mistakes that I pointed out.But your dialogue is good. Even in many places, you have chosen the word very well. I had fun reading, keep it up.
Always love these types of stories with op characters. It just feels fun when the characters are arrogant and then get beat down by the main character.
I've read through this twice now, extremely excited for more and the only complaint i have is that there's not more of it.This story has just so much potential and life to it and the premise is just so incredibly captivating, i really just wish there were thousands of chapters to read instead of hundreds.
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