hello guys this is my second review ;)first of all this is my first novel. so don't be disappointed in first few chapters, its getting better and better, as a reader I can tell that too. and i want to tell some things before you guys start reading. 1, MC Du Chan is an dropped out, gangster, and a otaku in his past life on earth, he is a bit childish in the starting chapters because he is in kids body! a 8 years old kid is not an adult! even with his past memories! but everything will change after some chapters. but he is selfish, and evil type MC, you can call it Anti Hero!2, Storyits strong plot and good i guess 3, HaremYes, its harem! but there are no dumb FL's, MC loves his harem more then anything! but he had no weakness to women! he would kill women too! 4, Grammarmy grammar is kinda not bad, you will understand whats happening and whats going on, but it will cause problem to some readers. 5, Updates yes, daily updates! thats enough i think, Thanks for reading this review! please try to read this novel too, Thanks in advance! ;) This novel is not bad!
hey author are you ok I really loved your story but for some reason the updates have stopped and you haven't even made a single comment in the app since over 9 months ago if you see this just know that it's ok if you don't want to write anymore but could you at least let us know if your ok like still alive
Way different from the typical system/game element novels. Has a thriller element that makes it very interesting and exciting. The Mc is also very cautious and not op. Basically a very refreshing story if you’re looking for a change.
I love this story. I literally read what chapters were available within two days.I’ve read a bit of this authors other books that get updated more frequently and they are good too but they don’t hold my interest like this one. So author I hope you update this story a bit more frequently then you have been. I don’t need daily updates but maybe once or twice a week would be lovely.Now, writing quality is very good. Few errors here and there but nothing that detracts from the reading experience.Writing stability, as I have only read this a few weeks ago but there has only been one update since. Refer to my initial paragraph of I’s love a slightly more frequent update schedule.Story and world development is really good. The world is what I would hope of the genre this novel is. Flawed. The society is literally a toilet and our MC learns it the hard way. His main desire is to just go back to his grandfather and live in ambiguity. Which I relate to on many levels.Character design isn’t anything special at the beginning of the story. Our MC is relatively plain in the beginning but the changes he goes through from story development make him interesting. All other characters are what I consider the basic anime palette.Now as this is a system novel I feel it deserves a mention. It literally involves trading, a skill I think is valuable especially for someone who doesn’t usually handle money or hang around “civilized” society. It’s the perfect system for the MC what happens to him.This a worth while story! I highly recommend it.
The concept is good. I like detective stories so....much. just keep updating more chapters so that I can read more of this story. Keep fighting Felix!!!!!!
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