He dropped his lookout duty and moved over to his sister's side as well, getting a clearer view of her ailment. A clearly deep gash was vitiating Velvet's leg, oozing blood profusely.
Decided to be shameless and write this review since nobody bothered to drop one. I guarantee that anybody who likes the genre would love it since I like it, wrote the plot, writing the novel, editing it and reading it and enjoying it as as a reader. So for anybody interested in this genre, read it, drop a comment, save it, and support me(if you like too).anybody interested in the plot can see the below spoiler(although not much of one for me)
Keep it going, man. It's a great start. It's an awesome story with a nice world background. I like your idea & story concept. Wish to read more so keep going!!!
Hello, Author here,if there IS anything you would like to Ask me,then i am here to answer all your questions, and i welcome criticism that develop m'y writting skills, and yeah, i give it 5 stars, but it's really a good novel in my opinion,will, it's m'y novel after all, so of course i will think so
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