The Search for Xanar

This story has immense potential, writing wise it is very good. Pacing is kind of off sometimes and either needs to slow down in some cases, or is just going too fast. These are just minor things that the author can get better at quickly. As for update stability I cant say much yet as there are only 4 chaps. Worldbuilding is solid along with character design. Cheers!

Author of this book,  shameless review here however I've gotta do it regardless! it's a slowburn story but  I promise it's worth the read! it's a fantastical adventure with mystery and Intrigue, you'll love it.

I love it very much, thanks author

Great story

Good book so far

Loved the storyline! But i felt too many protagonists.

Wow, this is amazing! Victor was one of the most mysterious and colorfull characters in your previous book, so I can't wait to read his story!

Weak ending, but good read!