the novel is f***king great . I love the well structured way in which the author writes the novel, this should have been a five star but of course there's always room for improvement
Hormonal **** who saves a girl in a f*cking game as a monster, becomes her slave as a "after sale reward" but he's just a p*ssy, MC legit has all the cliché bad things happening to him, girl friend breaks up with him for his bully, gets bullied because he looked at rich kids girl or smt, suddenly his dad has to pay a debt in a week but he can't afford it, father suffering an illness, etc. This is legit the most cliché stuff you can find on this site, it's honestly would be parody if they didn't take themselves so seriously. A wasted novel.
I have read 60+ chapters and made the rating very lower suddenly because:Writing Quality: Still good.Story Development: The development seems a bit less interest. I just cant wait for their existence will be exposed and the whole world's reaction about them.Character Design: I have no comments.Updating Stability: I made it one star because whenever you published the chapter, I cant get to the next chapter ecause they are privilage. Its 4 times that I didn't get the new chapter, ive been immpatient for so long!!!World Background: The more I read the story, the more about the Fantasy World seem like the other military vs fantasy stories, simple like any other. I want something like the modern ones has advanced tech vs fantasy with superhumans and powerful magic.
This book is very well do I just wish their was more chapters but as long as at least a chapter a week is released i feel that this book would do wonderfully. keep up the good work.
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