The Rise of The Divine Sword

I have so many things to point out.

The start is pretty nice, and neat. However, for some reason, it just becomes... how should I say this, weird afterwards.

The plot is quite... unique I guess? maybe you're trying to diverge from the usual face-slapping cultivation novels. But somehow, I really don't understand what the **** they're doing.

I feel like the reasons on why they were there is forced, and kinda like an excuse to just play around.

Also, I love Arkenvalle by the way. Please give her more screentime. In human form, please.

The minute he joined his mom and became her deciple the story went downhill and became cringe worthy honestly I don’t care for sentimental stories I thrive and enjoy chaos and pure unfiltered evil so this story is not for me I saw the antihero tag and got excited about this but the mc is soft and pitiful nevertheless this story has great Potential and others will enjoy it so don’t take my criticism seriously and keep writing ✍️

Its a fun read, lovin the hero. The pace is fantastic, lighting fast without missing any of the good stuff, so little filler. Fights are fun, characters varied, Still in its early stages, but volume one was a 5 star read.

keep doing what you are doing don't give up, and have fun with it and pls keep doing this great work also pls don't make him go dark a lot just little.

I don't know Why but............
I like this book well written and the Action scenes are Great as an author I struggle to Write Action Scenes but it seems to come to the You easy. Another thing I like about the book is that the main character is likable. I have only Read A few Chapter but  this book is now added to  my Libary

An interesting book overall. Was worth the read.







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Dear author,

i just want to ask you one thing. have you forgotten. forgotten little sword spirit. someone who was cultivating. did you drop him.

i hope to hear your answer soon dear author.

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