The Riftborn Heir

" FINE. Why not. I'm a man after all. I also give it my all.  "

Seeing Sophie like this Zach see her other side identity.

The grammar has drastically improved from before, but it definitely needs more refining. I'd suggest getting an editor to further refine the novel and increase immersion. Additionally, for personal improvement, try using grammar editing apps such as Grammarly. Buying Grammarly premium will definitely further refine your writing and maybe teach you some more grammar. That aside, the novel is highly interesting and engaging. I'd suggest having the MC improve his battle power, but that's about it.

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Very interesting book,keep it up author

Good book! Characters portrayed nicely. It’s an interesting read. Nice and simple words for easy understanding, I love this and I will love to see more from this author

the grammar in this story is just too awful. I understand that a ruff draft will have mistakes, but this is just unreadable. Writer has an interesting story idea, but giant plot holes in the world building and overall needs more work and polishing.

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