The Reincarnation of the Kingmaker

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Fantastic! This story is great and awesome! I love to read more chapters please author release more chapters please please please please please please

The 3 chapters are great to read, albeit there is nothing unique about its content yet. I was specially hooked by the well-crafted cliffhanger of chapter 1. Thankfully I did, now I am one of the first reader of this potential starlet. Keep up the good job Author, I hope that the story will continue to get better from here on out. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

All i got to say is W author and Chapter 3 paragraph 31.




Rest is for word count. Rest is for word count. Rest is for word count. Rest is for word count.

Writing as of chapter 8: The story development and world background is slowly building up and his interesting to see.  The characters interactions are interesting and feel real. There is a nice twist to the tower, dungeon genre as the MC isn't the only one reincarnating. It seems to hold potential.

I might update this review as I continue reading it!

Review at ch 35.
This is a very good story. It seems that author already has a well planned story with him. Hence, the pacing of story is also very good till now, without any filler fights or face slapping, which is a staple of Chinese manhwa.
Also, things are explained from the first chapter itself, instead of letting things be a mystery for hundreds of chapters to bait the readers. The reason for reincarnation, and the way story might go, everything is explained very well within first 10 chapters itself..
Do read this story if you are bored. This is among the best webnovel can offer

I like the story. The way it is being portrayed is well done. Its World Background and Character Design is quite unique from it's counterparts in Webnovel. The Story Development is progressing good, I can see where it is going. Writing Quality is not the best, but it's fine. Just a few improvements in some parts would be enough or just improve in the latter chapters would be alright.

From the title itself I can already guess that this novel is going to be like those stories where the MC will train other characters of the story to become powerful and will have a Kingdom-building touch. I love to read stories where it isn't going to be a one-man show and it involves building territories, so I'll be giving this story a chance. I hope the author won't disappoint me.