It’s not a bad start for the story but I feel like the author is moving through plot lines too fast. Slow the story down a little bit, flush characters out a little more. Read through first 30
This is an excellent book, the writing is perfect and story/world development is good. the only downside comes from the lack of vivid character description and this author has a tendency to start a book and even if it's going well, abandon it so dont't put too much hope on the book. It has 5 chaps at time of writing this review
The story plot is something new from the typical assasins stories. Though there are some grammar error, but we are not English Teacher so who are we to judge. Kudos authorsan. Keep improving.
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