Fucking amazing plot love it, it might be getting a bit too meta in the newest chapters but I’ll wait to see how it turns out. The differences between the hosts virtual world and others normal worlds is a bit confusing so more info on that would be good, but the rest is great. Now when it comes to the MC, I’ll just say I don’t like him. Even if he is ten he is pretty dumb and naïve, while also being greedy, uncaring, and weak willed. I thought the system would knock some sense into him but that’s didn’t happen, he is still not standing up for himself either to his “friend” (bully) or to his father. I get the father since he is a kid and in that case the mom should be the one to deal with that situation, but the bully is clearly a bad influence and the system did and said nothing about it. Overall I don’t like the MC who seems to be going down a depressing path. I don’t read books to be depressed and sad, I guess I should have known better and read the tragedy tag before reading but let me know if this situation is going to result in a tragedy or will it be stopped before that. For now I’ll drop, but I’ll might check later to see if the mc stays ignorant and keeps making the same mistakes or if he’ll stop before it is too late.
nice story, poor dude forced to overwork, people you cant stand still alive because you have to tolerate shit when you're not an op cheater who can survive taking on a sect at level 1.the thing is good,Hope it continue ! love it (read on royal road)
So far So Good. It has an interesting Premise and Smart-Headed Mc. Let's Hope he uses his Brain more than his D**k.The Side-Characters are not some 1-D characters just there to bootlick Mc.Since this is not a Harem I am willing to wait for the Chapters whose update rate is slow. But if Quality improves slightly & it focuses more on Story-Development than setting the World-building I think this Story could do wonders.
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