The Rebirth of the Fallen Sovereign

Taevya has never disappointed.  the book is a master piece if you find it dive in...best read always

It was cool

this book has so far lots of twists and turns.  Which makes it hard to put down.

lol roasted by Aarav_jain who don't even have a profile picture poor author                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   

Fairly good for the type of story it is.  It has the bonus of being a 'cannon fodder' MC VS the 'female protagonist's harem'.  Story allows the MC to affect the world by having foreknowledge of the 'story' so that he can change some outcomes such that they fall more in his favor.  He is also able to split the world luck by creating a second 'female protagonist'.  This should be a good one to pick up.

First the Progression is all screwed up in this novel, it takes the players 2 hours from the beginning village to the first dungeon... no gamer would walk a realistic 2 hours to get to a dungeon. Just absurd travel distances. Then the progression is very off, from the very first chapters we find you can get to lvl 500, so why are goblins 20000 hp at lvl 20? it took 2-3 mins for each goblin for the mc which has far more damage numbers then an equivalent lvl player. so it would take 5+ min to finish off a basic goblin at lvl 20... dude a vast majority of gamers dont have that much time on their hands from your own words. So there is no way they would grind for 5 min per goblin. Even in a party you have to take into account the exp you would get, even if it would be faster to kill a single gob in a party youd barely get exp for your efforts. Besides those major points the characters are okay.updates pretty fast.The world is your generic wealth disparity society, so nothing really new or amazing.Grammer is good, sentence structure is good as well.Slow novel that is generic and needs improvement.

The problem with this work is not even the author's laziness, after all, everyone knows he's going to write an action paragraph and the rest will just be the audience reacting. The author who incorporates the audience in his works must have common sense.

Honestly, as a reader I tend not to read anything that hasn't reached at least 200 chapters. I breached that rule when i started this novel tonight, and it turned out to be the best thing i have done in a long time. The story is absolutely enrapturing, the exposition is sweet and concise, theres no unnecessary info dumps, it builds itself so beautifully and im still wanting more. Ill be here for ever chapter from here on, thank you very much author.