The novel is good, pacing is alright a bit fast but tolerable, grammars good, mc is quite hasty in chapter 1-6 but other than that it's alright. Honestly hope that this would get picked because I don't see much romance novels asides from 99% vr almost real novel, I'm dragon novel, I'm gonna be lazy while getting strong novel and a bunch more thousands of copies. Although reading this might get boring to some but hey that's what fight, kill, offend young master, commit genocide to entire sect novels are for, this novel is kinda like taking a break from all those and once you're tired of those you can again read this while recuperating the weary mind reading the same thousand copies of itself. I'll end my rant here and I hope you guys read this novel and slightly enjoy it.
It was fun to read, fresh for my taste, and satisfying. The premise, characters, plot, and Worldbuilding are well made. The pace is smooth enough to make me enjoy every paragraph of the novel. I recommend this novel to all readers out there.
I really love this book, my best I have ever read, I really love the way you planned out your words and character development, every part of this book is amazing.
I don't want to bash you in, like the other guy did on his review. i know this is your first novel and your still improving but am gonna have to drop.Your mc is just way to annoying, i really did try and read more, but at this point am just skimming through chapters.(Mc problems)1: The fact the he actually paid for the wand that was disposable was just bad, he could have still made excuses or try to haggle over the wand, you think he would learn a thing or two over haggling because he grew in that type of environment, but no, He didn't.2: Some what the same problem, butcher guy was to ripping him off but as soon as he thought that the butcher guy was helping him with the girl, he dropped everything thing because he thought he was a "man of culture" for helping him with the girl.3: MOST ANNOYING PROBLEM OF THEM ALL! Annoying simp mc, Jesus Christ the first pretty girl that he meets he instantly goes monke mode for her, I can't imagine what would happen when he meets someone like a Princess or a Queen, that look more beautiful than her or some other higher being that's more beautiful.
The story has a very keen eye to details which appreciated. I read this story with ease as there was no detectable grammatical errors or anything. It's very sensual and hot! The writer cleverly uses words to describe things/tools without just stating it. You have to use your imagination, which is far better. You have to check this story out!
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