honestly this is the most frustrating thing I've ever read I was reading both this and the most generous master ever and I was enjoying both of them and it all of a sudden in chapter 350 two or something like that they decide that they're just going to copy generous master. And I really like this story I actually liked it more than I like the most generous master it's one of those reasons where some of that I really wish that they would let us know what the raw names of these stories are because I would like to confirm that web novel did not just take liberties or have some sort of serious screw up happen with their translators because the writing is so different that I thought the original writer was changed or he sold his book to somebody else to continue writing it or something. whatever the reason it sucks because web novel never bothers to inform us if something has changed. They never make any attempts to respond to complaints and they do their absolute best to hide from us the original source of the novel so we can't even check any of this stuff ourselves. either ways I'm dropping it here because there's no real point in reading this one if the generous mastery system might as well go continue reading that cuz I'm far very ahead and it will just be like recap in the last 500 chapters I'm not even going to see if it changes back.
I liked the beginning a lot because I felt that there was a lot of good translation and there was even the exciting plot development which made me look forward to the future
This story is okay ish, I guess it's not too bad. The writing doesn't help it tho. It's not like extremely bad, but it does get in the way a little bit. As others say, you need to work on your maths and the currency system otherwise it just feels off and you can't really put a value on things
EXPEXPEXPEXPpp...Oh. Hey. It's Fries here. As the author, I am required by the law (of shamelessness) to leave a self-review. 4.6 / 5. Won't be perfect. But it will be completed.So yeah. Don't take this story too seriously. As the writer, I only have 2 goals:1. Finish this book (5 volumes, 350 - 450 chapters total)2. Enjoy the writing process. Have fun!Hope you like this story as well! Have a good time!
I'm sorry but I just can't read this.....he is such a coward. And don't even get me started on how basically everyone can read his fucking thoughts even though his a master of occumency. Like what the ****, It's not even funny anymore it's just plain stupid.
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