The Prisoner of Change Dreams of Becoming a Sword Saint

Chapter 3: The Iron Fist, Danny Rand

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After Chu Lian graduated from high school, she moved out of the Chu residence and rented out an apartment near her university with her high school friend, Rou Xi. Chu Lian majored in computer science, she had no particular dream but she and Rou Xi found fun in adventuring the web; sometimes they would even do barely legal stuffs.

Bending his legs Lachlan tensed all the muscles throughout his body, his head tilted upwards and faced the statue, his eyes squinted and he pushed off. Leaving behind a crack in the ground he burst through the air, but when he took a step inside the room he quickly realised something was amiss. There were solid blocks sticking out of nowhere, as though they were invisible.

"Hindi na, okay lang ako. Hindi ko kasi sinubukan 'tong payong bago ko bitbitin kanina."

So I tugged on my mother's dress and said.

"Eu só tenho 4 pokémons, se eu avançar muito, estarei encrencado" Pensou Flecha sorrindo amargamente.

"Yesterday, there's a new variable showed up and disrupted our plan as he massacred a lot of our zombies including your first created mutant zombie ..."

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It's not bad. Actually, it's pretty interesting. The only issue I have with this sitory is the fact that it's quite obviously written by AI (or at least heavily modified by it) so that it's very VERY noticeable in every paragraph if you know how AI usually writes these kind of things, but other than making me roll my eyes it's not that big of an issue imo (but only because in my case I'm used to reading MTLs so it's not that much of a problem to me)Honestly, as far as AI stories go, this one is pretty good. If you like football I recommend you at least giving this one a chance, maybe you'll like it.

Very slow progression. Multiple chapters wasted on a single boss.