"Well we can use the various mercenary guilds that I am familiar with and a few of my old friends in the business if we pay in good hard coin they will take on any job. But as for breeders? I heard a healer in compound Afternoon by the name of Healer Thomas made a potion to speed up pregnancies by four to five months why don't we bring him into the project he seems to understand what is needed if only a little and make him lead it? As for the slave shortage and to get more breeders well I say we hold off on that till next year and every other female slave born say one in five are trained as pleasure slaves at first then turn into breeding sows. Do you think this would work? As for the training of slaves we are currently using Drugs, Submissive techniques since birth, then mind control, but the last option is for mages, so it really isn't viable since they are few and far between."
[Partner that boy has one of Vitra's sacred gears in him. It's the absorption line I believe but since I told you at least use that ability and don't kill him] Ddraig pleaded
This book is really great! It is refreshing to read like you're just casually reading a shounen manga. The book is easy to read because of how simple the writing style is. It doesn't use deep or unfamiliar words to make the story sound mesmerizing but makes the story quite tough to understand. Every chapter has a very intriguing and engaging plotline. Even if each chapter is quite long that it makes it quiet it doesn't really matter since it can get its readers invested in reading the story. Hope this gets more attention from the readers. Good work, author.
First let me start of by saying the reasons I like this novel.The main selling point is the unusual ability of MC to control insects and his merciles persona. Besides that, I personally think the interaction with the spider girl, Victoria is very cute.I always appreciate a good romance inside a novel—not too dramatic, nor too light—along with strong action sequences. If these two factors remain consistent throughout the novel, I might give it a full read until it's finished.I don't think a brilliant writing quality is necessary to attract someone like me, as long as it's not unbearable grammer or too AI generated, its fine.I don't know in which direction the story is shaping—this early in the novel, so I can't really comment about that. Though, I can feel you are trying to build something solid with the flow it's going.Honestly, and I mean I'll be very frank; I'm in it for the spider girl and well made characters, each having a distinct personality. As for the aspects you can improve on:when shifting from a emotion invoking scene to a different one—completely unrelated to it, try not to include too much details or added information in the following scene. I'm saying this because people, when already stirred with emotions beforehand, tend to skim past the long paragraphs filled with information, because they are forced to surrender the emotional content they felt earlier.Now onto the world building. I feel like you can improve on it; you know... adding a bit more depth and information about the world, or perhaps highlighting the surrounding atmosphere and vibes.Consistent upload schedule is always a given. There is no compromise in this, if you want to have a successful novel in this app, especially at the start.And yea, that's about it.. nothing more I can critique on. Keep up the good workP.S: all of these are simply my personal opinions, and I never claim to be an expert.also P.S: I'm a HUGE sucker for good fluffy romance, and action scene.
I really love how different this concept seemed to me. From the beginning u can tell dt drama is truly about to unfold. Looking forward to seeing mysteries getting unveiled and how Zara will get out of all this. Really hoping to see her live no matter what☺️☺️☺️🤗🤗🤗
Shamelessly rating my book 5⭐ because no one might. Thank you for your support, everyone. I love y'all. I'm working on with my English vocab these days, so I apologize for the changing writing style. I'll do some editing next time. Thank y'all🫶❤️
Well written novel, quite good character design. Maybe for someone who dislike fast paced and overpowered mc novel, this is not your cup of tea. So far there is no forced event, everything flows naturally. Decent novel with good prospect.
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