Sorry dropping the novel at this pointwhen i read about the children i thought you were adding depth to the novel, letting him have a family of sorts to develop the backstory. I ignored all the obvious plot armor because the overall story was interesting enough to continue and wonder about what will happen nextHowever now i realised his family just turned out to be convinenr sidekicks to go slay the monster king, i feel this novel is very superficial and shallow, the way everything just falls into place for him is very boring and also kinda disgusting to read about. Finally why is he even a imp or demon when most of the time you make him out to be some kind of mr. nice guy...... Did u think a nice demonic imp is interesting? I think at the start it was interesting to see his reaction but later on he turns into such a bland generic human that i feel confused for you the author, u have forgotten the demonic part or monster part of your own main character. So this are the 2 main complaints i have about this novel. Thank you for all the interesting chapters so far.
The story progresses quIte nicely, the workd is fascinating AnD franKly what I‘m most interested In, I like the main Character, his ThoughtS are easy to follow.
The story has a really good start🔥, it straight up gave the reader’s curiosity about missing for five years😅 when I thought that it was just gonna be a normal school genre thing haha. And kinda curious about his friends too so yeh imma keep reading hehe😌
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