As an avid fan of dungeons and SS heroes, I enjoyed the fact the man is cold to everyone but his son. The child is like the breath of fresh air that makes this story different from other OP hero novels.
And while the goal of the MC is unclear, I definitely wouldn’t mind reading more of this in my free time.
You have a great potential, Author ! So keep it up !
The novel is nice but, for some reason I'm somewhat disturbed by the mc being bisexual. World backround is a but copied but, nonetheless pretty good. Writing quality goes skyrocket when this author writes it. Loved the characters (Especially Theo) Loved the novel.
Overall, pretty good.
I'm really into your writing style. It's calm and clear, which makes the story much more understandable than stories that simply rush into action. It's very clear you've thought the storyline through. Also I'm a fan of Theo, he sounds totally adorable.
If you have any questions about the story, ask here.
My discord is https://discord.gg//4QhEQgpWxu
Disclaimer:
The beginning is rough with story plot problems, I apologize, I am trying to improve.
MC will be dating a female and male, if that is not your taste, please drop my story with no hate. Relationship is PG. Only profanity and fighting is R18.
I am currently reading at chapter 37. So far so good. The world building are clear, each character have their own unique personality ( Theo are the best character so far, I highly enjoying any chapters with him on it ) and I like how the author already planned how many chapters there is.
So, here is solid 5* from me
its alright, i guess. i read up to chapter 10 before i stopped. interactions between father and son are very unnatural and feels super robotic, and it feels like the bisexual stuff is done more for the sake of it than for actual character development. MC is inconsistent in some places, acting and behaving out of character for a "lone wolf" type. also, it felt like a poor writing choice to have the very first job be irregular. inconsistencies with registering to become a porter like how the guy who signed him asked for no ID at all. i guess if you want a novel with a gay mc, this is a choice. otherwise? just read SS rank suicide hunter or stay at home dad in another world, both of which fill their niche better than this one thats straddling both.
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And while the goal of the MC is unclear, I definitely wouldn’t mind reading more of this in my free time.
You have a great potential, Author ! So keep it up !
Overall, pretty good.
If you have any questions about the story, ask here.
My discord is https://discord.gg//4QhEQgpWxu
Disclaimer:
The beginning is rough with story plot problems, I apologize, I am trying to improve.
MC will be dating a female and male, if that is not your taste, please drop my story with no hate. Relationship is PG. Only profanity and fighting is R18.
So, here is solid 5* from me