If you read my bio you’d know that I love FUTBOL!!! ⚽️❤️⚽️ and I hope this is not one with a harem, and a low self-stem or pervert MC. I want team spirit, friendship, and rivalry, romance? It can wait at the door because this sport fan can’t wait for a great futbol novel. Don’t let me down!!
It has close to no grammatical errors except for a few spelling mistakes. It's a nice take on the quirkless world of mha but nothing new. Though it does have the potential to be a great fanfic. Just try not make the MC too overpowered too early. The pace at which you're going is just right. Great work and please don't drop the fanfic.
The novel is good..... Mc doesn't become outright OP, have little mental issues (which is expected with regression) please don't give it up. Though status page update would have been good. Like how while fighting his agility suddenly becomes 50?
Alright guys, as a shameless author I will support my work and rate it 5 star... without wasting any time let me just give the pros and cons according to what I feel.Pros:1) for those looking for strong mc not op and transmigration novel this is for you.2) I have planned for a harem novel and it might be a little big.3) Mc is neither a saint nor a pure evil. I will also making it sure everything that happens now and later will make sense.4) there won't be any plot armour. mc won't gain sudden strength. cons: 1) I am a new author and english is not my first language so there might be few grammatical errors.2) for harem haters this is totally not for you.. but if you can ignore the harem part then maybe this will be an interesting readAlright that's it... thank you for reading and supporting my work...
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This story is good and it has good potential, I just hope the author updates more often, I was a bit disappointed in the first chapoters when he was hesitatnt to kill
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