Overall, I like it. I like how cute it is, but as for the book cover, I know there's still more you can offer there so keep it up! I will truly recommend this, this is worth youuurr very precious time. Keep writing, my dear author!!!!!!!!
So: a really good premise and an interesting ability. Special forces and an ability that can multiply or reduce the laws of physics and other peoples powers, which gives a solid base to build a story on.Character design: Starts out really good, the MC seems well thought of. But then the "legal loli" appears and he turns into a horn dog. She pampers him, he is - this close to fudging her and what the heck happened to my nice story and the good premise?World Background: Actually great, well thought of and interesting.Writing Quality: Pretty good for a Webnovel.
I quite liked the story but it gets a bit hectic along chapters +27. After the ancestral transformation everything just went a bit chaotic. I do wish that the author could go more in depth into the mc's backstory as that seems quite interesting. Or he can make it into a flashback. Overall though the story is quite good and I have to say I only wrote this review for more chaps. Also if author sees this review do you have a outline to follow because seeing where the story should end up helps greatly with planning it out for future chapters.
"To be honest, I'm jealous of your ability! An evolved version of BloodLust, my skill!" While saying all that, Harp prepared and brandished his club towards Dylan
Loving it so far man! Keep it up boss! It's been good so far author, the story is something I've been looking for. Really like what you've done with the whole revenge arc. It's pretty fast paced with time skips here and there which I don't mind. All in all worth it!
Webnovel doesn't pay the translators, and this is the result! It's the same issue with 'Tales of Herding Gods', 'Forty Millennia of Cultivation', 'Kingdom's Bloodline', and now this novel. All the top-tier novels for which Webnovel obtains translation rights end up being dropped midway and are never completed.
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